Sunday, 2 September 2012

絵本のためのエチュード。


昔、作った拙い詩を入れてみた。
やっぱりビジュアル的には英文の方が美しいから、
この機会に英語の詩を勉強しようかなあ〜
きっちり韻を踏んで・・・



こんな感じかなあ〜アハハ
英語にご堪能な方、添削をお願いします。

White sports car
It
White bird flying in the blue sky

Even through we were very poor
You forgave me that I have it 
White sports car

Also black cloud filled with anxiety
Cold wind coming attack
There was no fear
I inflated chest full
Dream of ours
To cuts through them
We were flying feverishly

Time it is....

White sports car
It 
White bird flying in the blue sky

Even through you were already gone
Since the very sky and wide 
I'm still flying

Time as it is.....
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